My experience was a pretty good one. I did good revisions and had lots of detail. I put a lot of effort into it. I think I edited really well. I also made good paragraphs for example, where a new person speaks. I think I could do better by putting less detail and adding more dialogue.
Link to my Narritave: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1koPkW-UCbGYZ4Pwi4k1XslAWNGI1OzoPX-q3fRrvCKs/edit