This is my small moment narrative. I chose this topic becuase I wanted you to have a nightmare! I added dialogue and heart of the story. And I put a lot of work into it. I also am writing this so I can get good grades. And you should get a nightmare. Please because I am getting graded on this. so please enjoy
my story.
I really liked that scary things started popping up everywhere and chasing the cart. It felt like I was on the ride! Wow! You did a great job!
Hi!I liked your story and it reminded me of when I went to this place where I was getting all wet and stuff like that. Good job, Jack!Why’d you want to scare us though 🙁
Great job Jack! I really like your story, because it is scary because like when the zombie tried to grab you, and you used a lot of action words. I also felt like I was in the ride.
Great job jack with your dialogue. Scary, creepy love it.
I realy like the topic.