Link to my essay: Here
The essay portion of my Capstone took a long time to complete. I had to think of what to write. As I wrote I thought of new changes that made my essay better. Also, my friends helped by adding comments to my google doc. Sometimes I listened to their comments and sometimes I decided I liked the essay just the way it was. The more I worked on it, the better my essay became. The wording of what I wanted to say became better by eliminating and adding words. When I thought I was done writing my essay, my teacher helped by rewording my essay to make it sound even better.
To get ready for my final presentation, I tried to memorize my script to prepare for what I was going to say for each slide. I also made flashcards in case I messed up. I was initially going to do an Ignite but towards the end I switched to a TED talk. With a TED talk, I could auto advance the slides myself instead of them auto advancing every 15 seconds. Another reason I switched was so I could have as many slides as I wanted instead of just 12 slides. My final reason is because now I don’t have to say everything in 3 minutes. Now I have 3 – 5 minutes to present my information.
My final presentation
Great job! I really liked how you told us the reasons you switched to TEDTalk.
Like you told us you made a TEDTalk because it did not auto advance and how there can be many slides.
I really like that you inclued the part about the ted talk.
Great Job! I liked how you said that you were going to do an Ignite but then you switched to a TED TALK. I also liked how you explained why you changed and you talked about what you have to do in an ignite.
Great job. I like how you told your process in making you final project.
I like how you said what took you long. Great job on describing the process
I like how you told us that sometimes you accepted your friends’ posts and sometimes you didn’t. I also like how you explained that you had switched from an Ignite to a TEDTalk.
Great Job! I like how you said that when you were working on your essay and you got feedback sometimes you didn’t change it. Also I liked how you said you switch from a TED talk to an ignite and why you wanted to.
Great job! I really liked how you talked about going from an ignite to a ted talk!
Great job Jaiden! I really like how you said how the TedTalk was better for you, and how it was different from the ignite. Great job!
I love how you say what you did to make your essay better. Amazing job!!
Good job! it really liked how you talked about how you switched from an ignite to a Tedtalk.
Good job. I like how you linked your essay, talked about memorizing your presentation, and said how you switched to a TED talk but also gave us reasons why. Really good job.
This is really good! I like how you said when you thought you were done your teacher helped you reword some things. I also liked how you explained what you can do with a ted talk.
Great Job! But why all the tags?