Paintball battle is one of my favorite writing pieces I ever made. It is about a paintball birthday party my friend was having. I wrote about that because it was so fun. Even though that is not my favorite topic I say it is a number two. It is also one of my favorite things to do even if I can’t do it very often.

I really thought that the strength of my story was my dialog and how I made the paintball gun sound. One example is when “We all got out a…” “Watch Out!” “Bang.” I had so many ideas.