This was my first writing unit and it was amazing. It was definitely the best personal narrative I have ever made. My personal narrative was about me about three years ago when I went water skiing for the first time in camp.

Before I picked the story about water skiing I was really torn between two of my drafts. One was the water skiing one which is the one which I chose and a story about me skiing in the rocky mountains of  Vail and Beaver Creek. The reason I picked the water skiing one over the other one was because when I was writing the skiing draft I thought to myself would a reader find this story interesting because in skiing there is not much talk so it was mostly internal thinking which is good but should not be all of your story basically so I went with the water skiing one and I definitely do not regret it. 

I think one of the thing’s I improved from last year was probably my spelling and my punctuation. It was terrible last year. 25 percent of my words were misspelled which is really not good. Think about it. ¼ of your word’s had A red line under it. But that was last year, this is a new year and I definitely changed. There were only about fifteen words misspelled when I went back to edit the passage.

I just named the thing’s I improved in but not yet my strength’s. I think I always had a lot of writing stem especially   when I am typing which is very good in my opinion because if I didn’t have a good writing stem then it would take a long time to write the story or narrative which would not be good. I think I’m also good at telling which part of the story is most important and what part’s should make the story or not.