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Dhoni
I am from acting. From moving around with different characters, who each have all different emotions. Reading each word on the script. I am from acting.
I am from my diary. Â From the secrets I hold and the life I have that will never be told. I can express the way I feel in a picture or word and no one will ever see. I am from my diary.
I am from North Carolina. From the wind blowing through my hair, while running with my grandpa’s six or seven dogs. The warm homemade meals and all the laughing with family that makes it feel like home. I am from North Carolina.
I am from Christmas. From going to bed at twelve, waking up at three, then going to bed and waking up to presents. The music and putting the milk and cookies by the fireplace. I am from Christmas.
I know I am more places, but I am from these places the most.
Hi Dhoni,
I love your post! Have you been in any shows, or commercials, when you act? It is so cool how your grandpa has six or seven dogs! Is Christmas your favorite Holiday? Your post was very inspiring, and good.
-Bye
Hi Dhoni!
I really liked your writing. I liked how you started the paragraph and ended it with the same sentence. North Carolina sounds really fun! I’ve never been there.
Bye!
Hi Dhoni,
I liked how you repeated where you were from at the end of every sentence. I also really enjoyed reading the end where you said, “I know I am more places, but I am from these places the most.” I liked this part because it shows that you really care about these places. I also liked how you didn’t only mention things that you do, you also mentioned holidays and places.
Antara
Dhoni,
I think that your where I’m from piece was very nice. The way you described the places and the things you love made me want to like them too. When you said “The life that will never be told” when talking about your diary was excellent. How long have you had the diary? Zane