The Pool

Hi guys at the place we went to for vacation they had a really cool pool area. There is a water slide,  a kids hot tub, an adults hot tub, a splash area for younger kids, and of course a main pool. Me and my friends played basketball in the main pool for most of the time but we also did our version of the polar plunge challenge. We would sit in the hot tub for about fifteen minutes then on the count of three we would dunk our heads get out of the hot tub and jump into the main pool. It was pretty cold at first but after a while we got used to it. Me and Ursie went on the water slide all the time. We did it sitting up, laying down, and with our knees up to our nose. Which do you think made us go fastest? Let me know by commenting down below.

4 thoughts on “The Pool


  1. I think maybe with your knees up to your nose. I really liked this post and it was really detailed. I think that maybe I would like to go to that place sometime!


    1. Well thanks for the suggestion but after looking it over a couple of times I was sure that that was what I wanted to say but thank you for teaching me things that you think would improve my post and my writing.


  2. Hi Carly,

    Your post was really good. It looked like you had a lot of fun over the vacation. That pool area must have been really fun if it is how you described it. I really enjoyed how you described every area in the pool.
    What was your favorite part about the pool area?
    Bye,
    Chloe G


    1. I think my favorite part was the waterslide. It was a little slow and boring but once we learned the ways that made you go faster it made it more enjoyable. I think my favorite attempt was when I went eyes shut knees up to my nose. I got a lot of water in my eyes but it was worth it and all the waiting in line.

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