Life in the colony is really good so far because we just finished building our colony. This is how it went. First we made the houses, and we made them out of cardboard. Then we planted all of the seeds in the farm. Then we turned the brown cardboard into black, brown, and red. It took a very long time but we managed it, and everyone in the colony was very happy because they would not freeze outside, and they would have somewhere to sleep.
They fly silently
through the sky
down beneath they see a road
with cars passing by.
My mother told me
they’re made out of water.
Just like a flying sea.
Whatever they are just let them be.
I wrote about Roblox because I play it every day. I took pictures from my i Pad and sent it to my drive. I tried to look for books about Roblox but I could not find any. I put in a few text structures for example pros and cons, compare and contrast, text features, subtitles and glossary. I also learned that you could put in a mini story. My mini story is about Wizard Tycoon. I had to talk like an expert or I would not be writing about Roblox. Also instead of just writing facts you could add some ideas. I also used I but then Mrs. Degrazia told me to change it. I learned to connect my chapters to have a logical sequence. Also your pictures need to match your words. Remember this is an expert book you will learn something. Hope your walking away thinking about something on Roblox.
I learned that you have to persuade your audience really well to make it work. A persuasive essay is when you tell someone to make a change. To make it work you have to use strong words. I also learned not to use words like maybe, it could happen,it could work.Sometimes you can even talk back to the audience. Sometimes you can do a mini story.
I think that if I put my essay on the camera I would look at the camera so I think I would have persuaded more people. I feel pretty good a lot of people could see it because I’m pretty sure I will persuade them. I also would have persuade more people if I pointed my finger to them saying you.
https://youtu.be/iJ0VazrmT_c
Com’on daddy, “We’re going to be late to my soccer game”, I said. We were playing against New York City.
At the start of the second half we were down one to zero. I thought we were going to lose.I felt gloomy.
My coach told me I had to play goalie. I was very stressed because I don’t like playing goalie.
At least we got to start with the ball in the in the second half “YAY”, I said. That made me feel a little better.
Two minutes into the second half C got fouled. The free kick was hard to make. Well I thought so.
He shot it so hard and high the goalkeeper had no chance of saving it…I screamed to C,
“Nice shot, I don’t think I can do that.”
It was suddenly one to one.There was one guy on the other team close to the goal. I said in my head I can block this I can block this. When the guy shot it I used all my might to jump up and block it… and somehow I did. I could not believe it. I had such a good feeling that I could block anything!Later N was driving down the left side trying to juke everybody out. Do you think he scored…? YES! He made it because he kicked the ball very hard.
Before time ran out I thought we would win. And guess what… we did. It was our best game.I just knew it. Next we shook hands. I couldn’t believe we beat that team!