This is my small moments narrative. I have learned many things to make my writing better. Like making a better lead. Also, I have learn when to start a new paragraph and to add quotation marks too. I love to go to the pool but it was one of the scariest things that happened to me. I learned all this stuff at Heathcote. It took very long to make this story. I worked very hard, so hope you enjoy the story!
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I love your story because I love to go to the pool.
Amazing Daniel ! Awesome dialogue! I liked when you used furious. My favorite part was when when your sister pushed you in the pool and you thought there was a monster attacking you.
That was funny I do NOT like going to the pool. But I really do not like going on high dives or regular diving boards. I am with you with being very like:( keep it going!