Persuasive – stop cutting down trees – Daniel

I made a project that took very long and it was very hard, but I am finally done. I learned many things. Like at the beginning I would use a lead, and try to persuade you. My teacher (Ms. Degrazia) taught me how to how to do a claim and examples. And if you cut down trees than you can maybe stop. So I hope you get persuaded.

 

 

Summary for October Ogre

This is my summary, I learned a lot of stuff of how to make a summary. Like you don’t add every single detail , and tell who the detectives are. So I hope you enjoy my summary!

Bradley, Brian, Nate, and Lucy went to go trick or treating at the Shangri – la Hotel. The detectives wanted to find the children that disappeared. But they didn’t know who took children away. So they discovered a crack in the floor beneath them. So they took the candy and, fell and, they found the children.

Small Moments Narrative

This is my small moments narrative. I have learned many things to make my writing better. Like making a better lead. Also, I have learn when to start a new paragraph and to add quotation marks too. I love to go to the pool but it was one of the scariest things that happened to me. I learned all this stuff at Heathcote. It took very long to make this story. I worked very hard, so hope you enjoy the story!