My persuasive speech is about the Heathcote  bathrooms and  here are some things I learned.You had to say it really loud so they can hear you. I also learned that what you wanted to happen or not happen. You have to point and talk to your audience.I feel like I should have looked at the camera because I only did once.  These are some things I realized after my video.

When I did my persuasive essay I thought I  did really good because I persuaded my audience. I knew I did because when they saw my title they said thank you! But what I mostly learned is that you had to say words such as I believe or you should believe or so you should to persuade your audience.

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