Personal narrative

this is my personal narrative. I worked very hard on it. Here it is.

2 thoughts on “Personal narrative

  1. How you write juicy word is really good, you made me want to read the rest and you made me fell like I was there and you made it so I got a little scared for you. I think you should put in a … after, It froze.

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