The sick sleepover is one of the best/advanced stories I have written.
The process of writing this story was long. I got this idea because it was during may 2020 so covid was a thing. At first I had so many ideas I tried to write as fast as I could so I could write them all. Unfortunately I could only write three. At first before I edited and revised my story I thought it was good! I thought when I showed it to my teacher (Mrs. Cooper) she was going to think it was great and ready to be published. About 2 weeks later it was all edited and revised and I thought it was SO much better.
I think I did well with my dialogue and inner thinking. I really liked the heart of my story because it was really interesting.
I think I could have improved the end of my story a little bit.
Some things I learned while writing this story were not tell,flashbacks and flashforwards,And making my inner thinking in italc.
I think this story was a HUGE improvement from last year. I think i improved with my dialogue,and making it interesting.
Overall I think this was a great story, one of the best ones I have written. Writing this story was a great experience with pros and cons. I really liked this story and enjoyed writing it.
I thought that your story was really good and that you added inner thinking and dialouge in the right places so it made the story so much more interesting.
Good job I really like your writing and it was very good even though I was the one that was sick you still wrote it like I did when I was the one that was sick. Great job!