Small Moment Narrative

This is my small moment narrative. At first we wrote down story’s, then after a while we started  choosing story’s. I chose the Dragon Coaster, because it was one of the best times with my friend. I learned about the heart of the story, and learned that you have to expand on one part. We a talked a lot about paragraphs, for example every time a new person is talking you need a new paragraph. We learned that to much dialogue does not make sense. I hope you like my story.