Do you think Martin Luther King Jr’s speech was realized? I don’t think so. I think that this was realized after it happened. But at the current time I don’t think this has been realized.
I think this because there have been many white people shooting black people and many protests. For example Colin Kapernick’s protest about black shootings. Another reason I think this is because on September 28 2016 there were five black shootings in 5 different cities and people are starting to think that white police men are bias. If a police man sees a black person doing something bad the first thing he is going to do is shooting him.
Most white people hate black people and are very bias. For example if a black person applied to being a businessman if the person who is giving him the interview is bias towards black people he will give the black person a little chance to be hired. Some of this bias act leads to deaths. Almost half of the United States is bias towards black people and this is a big problem.
I think this will end soon and Martin Luther King Jr’s “I Have a Dream” speech will be realized. 
If I were a stranger I would have no idea what you’re talking about. Mention what you’re taking about in the beginning. Besides that it was good.
I agree with you that some people are bias.I also think it was really creative to put a picture to represent how many people are bias.
In the first paragraph, I didn’t know what you were writing about. I didn’t understand how what you wrote about connected to Martin’s speech.
I like your post. I agree with you. I like how you used current events and turned them into examples. I think this really shows your point of view.
I think you should put more thinking of Martin Luther King, Jr.
I like how you said some examples. But since you said,”I think that this was realized after it happened”, I think you should use some examples to support that too
What do you think? What realized? I don’t really understand this post.
Try to explain the chart a bit more because I was a bit confused when I got to it.
I don’t understand how you started your blog post.
You should talk more about his speech and less about police and black shootings.