Some writing techniques I used effectively in this piece were internal dialogue and writing action after talking. A thing in my writing I would like to improve is emotion. Sometimes I make the story too flat, or I convey the wrong emotion. I’m most proud of the range of techniques I used in this… Continue reading Personal Narrative And Reflection
I’m reading the “City of Ember” by Jeanne DuPrau. It’s about an underground city that is running out of resources, our two main characters are Lina Mayfleet and Doon Harrow who will solve this problem. Lina and Doon are both looking for ways to improve their daily lives. But there are bigger problems stirring in… Continue reading The City Of Ember by Jeanne DuPrau
Please read the previous post first to understand what I’m talking about. Queen Coral is very protective of her daughters. One reason for this is because there is a murderer who keeps killing her daughters while they’re still in their eggs. Another reason for this is there is a huge war and the Seawing tribe… Continue reading The Lost Heir by Tui T. Sutherland
Please read “The Lost Heir by Tui T. Sutherland ~RECAP & INTRO” first to understand what I’m talking about. Tsunami’s ambition and impulsiveness have often got her and her friends into trouble. She also gets frustrated easily and only sees things one way. Because of her attitude, her friends sometimes think she only does things… Continue reading The Lost Heir by Tui T. Sutherland
I’m reading The Lost Heir by Tui T. Sutherland. Here is a recap: In “The Lost Heir” there are five main characters, Clay, Tsunami, Glory, Starflight, and Sunny. In this world, everyone is a dragon, and there is a huge war going on, Clay, Tsunami, Glory, Starflight, and Sunny are the dragonets of a prophecy… Continue reading The Lost Heir by Tui T. Sutherland | RECAP & INTRO
Hi, I’m back! This summer I did a lot of fun stuff, like hiking, going to Legoland, and swimming in the Scarsdale swimming pool. I’m excited to be in 5th grade because we get to participate in more grown-up stuff. I’m thrilled because we get to build benches and possibly paint a wooden boat! I’m… Continue reading Welcome to 5th Grade!