Adeline and the Wonder

This is my personal narrative. In our first writing unit we learned about  paragraphs,making endings , and using dialogue. This is my first blog post and I am so excited to share it with you!I hope you like my first blog post!

 

One stormy night not so long ago I was in the kitchen. I asked, “Mom what’s for dessert?”

Oh I hope it’s brownies! I thought

“Brownies,” hollered my mom from the basement.

Yes! I thought excitedly

My dad handed me a brownie, “What about a thank you?”

“Oh thank you,” I replied.

“That’s my girl,” said my dad of course proud of his daughter.

“Addie you and Izzy can share the brownie because that’s the last one,” said my mom tiredly.

I was so mad I hit my sister, Addie and I ran!

I ran through the dining room and into the living room.

And my sister was there waiting, watching! Well I don’t know what she was doing but she was doing something!

Her face filled with anger. My feet were glued to the ground. It’s like my sister made some super strong Gorilla Glue!

I wondered how did she make it happen? I tried to lift my right foot it did not move. I lifted my left foot it did not budge. How was this possible? I was frightened!

My sister’s face was red hot. It  was scary.

My sister jumped and did a wonder women!

For those who are interested in learning what a wonder women is here’s what it is.

Think of a diver or a belly flop. She wrapped her arms around me and I fell to the ground. I was so mad I could hit her again but we all know what that leads you to so don’t!

But I think I should forgive Addie I was the one who started it. So I chose the good person.

I will and I mean I will forgive Addie I know I can.

“Addie I’m sorry will you forgive me?”

“Of course,” said Addie with a little grin.

Maybe around seven thirty my sister and I came running into the kitchen took the brownie off the plate and split it in half,and we enjoyed our wonderful treat.