One writing technique I used in my writing was action and dialogue. one example that I found in my writing is ” soon a counselor came thumping into our bunk with her heavy hiking boots and said in a matter-of-fact sort of way ‘you know if you really feel sick you can go to the nurse right?’… and we did.” Another example that I found in my writing is “‘so cold’ I chattered as I clutched my arms.”
one area in writing that I need to improve is knowing when to stop and move on to the next part of my story. Sometimes I just work on one part of my story and get so distracted by putting in all the details that I forget to work on the other stuff and also when there is too much detail in paragraphs it might sound really boring.
One thing that I am most proud of is the detail and description even tho sometimes I get too distracted in t6he details. I tried not to add too few details but also not too much. One of my favorite parts of details in my writing is “It was late so we took our flashlights. We walked down the gravel road. We walked slowly, our tall shadows followed us by the flashlights. “So cold” I shivered as I clutched my arms. “ I really like this part because the reader can imagine what it might look like.