When we started our poem unit we went right away into our Were I’m from poems. I thought it would be hard to find the correct words to fit into the poem but it was easy. We needed to record what we said and write blog posts about our poem like this one. This it my recording after I was done:
I hope you enjoyed my video. The video wasnt that easy with trying to not hesitate alot and trying to say the right words, but I still got it.
I think you could write more about the process and your feelings and im needs ‘ like i’m
I think that you could of maybe elaborated a little more on the actual poem and maybe you could of added how we decorated our poems. I like your ending though. I think that your ending ended the blog post very well.