My persuasive writing was about youth group at my church and how we should have Korean school. I learned that persuasive writing is not just persuading people. It’s also about taking your reading voice and putting it out there to persuade other people. The techniques that helped me was trying not to be wishy washy and adding onto my text by saying,  for example or another reason is. I felt very weird after I watched my video. I feel like I didn’t persuade everybody  because my audience didn’t understand what I was talking about. I think I can look at the camera more often and change the tone of my voice and make it loud, proud and confident.