I wrote about how everyone should keep the Scarsdale pool clean. I have learned to really speak to my audience and be clear and look up at the camera sometimes. I have also learned not to be wishy washy and also to use a persuasive voice. As well I have learned how to use pop out words like you may think or believe me. I have also learned to use details and evidence. The most convincing words I used were you may think and we could use.

While watching my persuasive speech I realized I could of had more emotion, and I also realized I could be a little more serious. I also could look up at the camera more. Also, I could of added more action words to my speech. To convince my audience more I also could of described the pool more. So that’s what I learned to write a persuasive essay.